Some weeks ago I mentioned that I would be exhibiting an image in my photography group’s show this coming September. Several people showed interest in seeing the shot and I promised to share it in due course.
But let’s take a step back. We’ve been planning this exhibition for some time. It will be part of an annual local event, the Borough of Ealing Art Trail, or BEAT. Many local artists exhibit as individuals, throwing open their homes for the two weekends of the trail to show, and hopefully sell, their art. Others exhibit as part of a group, as we are doing.
Having decided to participate this year, as we’ve done several times in the past, we needed a venue. A local church was approached and the vicar was keen to have us. The church is very colourful inside; I shared a photo of it in my March Changing Seasons post after we visited to plan our theme. Consequently we decided that all our photos would be black and white. We also settled on a square format to create unity between what were likely to be quite disparate images, as we each have our own style.
The choice of black and white led to conversations about a theme, and after much discussion we settled on:
BETWEEN LIGHT & SHADOW
Expanding on this, a brief was set:
Truth lives in ambiguity. What we see depends on where the light falls.
We were encouraged to consider what was left unsaid in our images, the gaps left for the viewer to complete. And we were able to submit four images for consideration, one of which would be chosen for printing and display while the others would feature on our website.
I chose to submit some images that were a straightforward approach to the idea of light and shadow, as well as one that took a more humorous angle and another that explored the idea that a simple image could ‘hide’ a wealth of meaning.
All four images had come quite some way from the originals I had taken. Even before squaring and in most cases converting to black and white, I had edited them all to some extent. So for this week’s Lens Artists challenge, in which Ritva asks us to show how we use editing tools to ‘capture the same subject through a variety of unique approaches’, I thought I could take the opportunity to respond to requests to share my chosen image, and the others I submitted while also showing how I arrived at a final version what both pleased me and met our brief.
For each image below I’m posting three versions. The first is as the shot looked when first taken, with no edits. The second is the version I settled on when I edited it at the time. And the third is the edit I did for submission, following the brief for square, black and white images. I’m also including the accompanying text I drafted for each, linking to the brief. This was only needed for the one selected for the exhibition, but I’m hoping some of you might like to guess which that was and I didn’t want to give the game away!
To sunbathe or not to sunbathe; that is the question

Taken from the Malecón in La Paz, Baja California, Mexico (straight out of the camera).
At the time I made relatively few changes to this shot. I cropped the top to remove what I felt were distractions such as the boats and land beyond. I also cropped it slightly on the right side to improve the positioning of the man. And finally I brightened the image and boosted the contrast a little.


To create a square image for the exhibition I cropped just from the left side as I wanted to maintain the position of the man’s head according to the ‘rule of thirds’. And I converted it to black and white using Nik Silver Efex Pro. My accompanying text read:
A hot day on the beach in La Paz, Mexico had me wondering if this man knew that he was only partly shaded from the sun. I confess I smiled to think of the half-and-half tan that might result as he lay between light and shadow.
Sunrise Apsara at Angkor Wat

A devata at Angkor Wat, Cambodia, caught by the sun soon after sunrise (straight out of the camera).
I was pretty happy with this shot as it stood but I did straighten it and made it just a little brighter.


For the exhibition submission I cropped both top and bottom to create the square. I converted it to black and white using Nik Silver Efex Pro, boosting the contrast as I did so. My accompanying text read:
Tourists flock to Angkor Wat to take photos of the iconic towers silhouetted against the sunrise. Once they have their photos, most leave to seek breakfast. But if you venture into the ruins at this time you will find them relatively peaceful after the hubbub outside, and the slanting rays of the sun just catching the relief carvings of the devatas and apsaras, that adorn the walls.
Genocide

At Tuol Sleng Genocide Museum in Phnom Penh, Cambodia
Originally I did very little to this image, simply brightening it a little to bring out the texture of the wall and increasing the contrast so that the barbed wire stood out more clearly.


For the exhibition submission I simply cropped it on both sides, but mainly the right. I wanted to achieve what I felt was the most striking pattern in the wire. And again used Nik Silver Efex Pro for the conversion. My accompanying text read:
A simple length of barbed wire speaks to the horrors once perpetrated at the infamous Khmer Rouge Security Prison 21, now the Tuol Sleng Genocide Museum in Phnom Penh. The museum sheds light on the darkest period of Cambodian history, surfacing terrors that were once concealed from the world.
I started my visit here thinking that it might be inappropriate to take photos. But then I found myself thinking the opposite – that it was important not only to take but to share them. As Holocaust survivor Elie Wiesel declared, ‘We have learned from history that tragic truth is better than no truth’.
Woman in Black

In the Plaza de Armas, Santiago, Chile. Looking back at my files I realised I took ten shots of this woman, she intrigued me so much. This was the one I selected for further editing.
Unlike the other shots I submitted for the exhibition, I had already converted this one to black and white at the time. In doing so I made the background figures much less obvious, and (I felt) brought out the character in the woman’s face. I also cropped out some of the distracting line on the lefthand side (I think it’s the pole of the sunshade she sat under) and the figures at the top.


For the exhibition submission I cropped it more tightly on three sides, removing that distracting pole entirely as well as the figures in the background. I also increased the contrast and sharpened the image using Topaz AI. My accompanying text read:
When I take candid street photos I like to speculate about the lives of my subjects. This lady in a café in the Plaza de Armas in Santiago, Chile intrigued me. The dark hat and sunglasses suggested mystery to me but gave no clues. Was she meeting a lover perhaps? Or drinking alone after a life well-lived? Or was she simply taking a break from shopping or some other more prosaic task?
So, now you’ve seen all four, which versions of each do you prefer? And which one would you guess was chosen for the exhibition? Bear in mind that the curation team (three people, one of which was me) looked not only at the creative and technical qualities of the images but also how well they met the brief and how they would sit alongside the other choices.
69 Comments
equinoxio21
Excellent. I see you too straighten the photo. And crop, and eliminate distractions… I agree totally.
Favourite? I guess the devata, followed by the old lady… (Though I like them all…)
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you very much 😊 Absolutely, horizons have to be straightened (and see tomorrow’s post on that subject!) I’m glad you like them all as neither of those is the one chosen for the exhibition – we went with the barbed wire at Tuol Sleng, which I believe fits the theme the best. I hope you’ll agree – you can see all 18 here: https://ealinglondonphotography.co.uk/2026/07/between-light-shadow
equinoxio21
Horizons and verticals are pet worries of mine too. 😉
Hopping over,.
equinoxio21
Just been there. Many are vdery, very good. You have a good, challenging group there. Michael Ostrolenk’s “little old” lady looking outside her window I find very moving.
Sarah Wilkie
That one of Michael’s is quite possibly my own favourite, among several I really admire 🙂
equinoxio21
And yes, the barbed wire fits the theme very well.
bluebrightly
I’m curious, Sarah, and I understand you all were weighing a number of different factors. It’s fun to see the 3 versions for each photo, and the impact that monochrome and the square format have. The woman in black is to me, a stronger photo with the square crop and no color. The barbed wire seems to work better as a rectangle and in color, to me. Your text for that photo is great.
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you for the thoughtful feedback Lynn 😊 Yes, there were a number of factors to weigh up. I agree about the crop of the woman in black looking better than either of the previous versions. The barbed wire I’m not so sure about – I like it both ways I think. All will be revealed later today in my next post!
grandmisadventures
beautiful collection, all the more so from seeing the different variations
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you very much Meg 😊
Ritva Sillanmäki Photography
ready to reveal to winner
Sarah Wilkie
All will be revealed in my Changing Seasons post tomorrow 😀
The Permanent Tourist
The lady in black and the Angkor Wat were definitely my favorite.
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you, I’m glad you liked them 🙂 The lady in black seems to be the overall favourite here for sure!
leightontravels
Very insightful in terms of the editing process and how sometimes minor adjustments can make such a difference to perspective. Sorry to be yet another sheep but yes, it’s the woman black.
Sarah Wilkie
Many thanks Leighton 😊 Writing this made me pause to think why I make the editing decision that I do.
the eternal traveller
How interesting to see the before and after photos. My favourite is the lady in black but I’m guessing the beautiful shot at Angkor Wat may have been the chose one.
Sarah Wilkie
I’m glad you found this interesting – thank you Carol 🙂
Annie Berger
Guess I’m following the crowd, Sarah, as I also preferred the Woman in Black. Loved the editing steps you chose, particularly removing the pole on the left. I chose it because I wondered if she might have lost a loved one during Pinochet’s dictatorship and participated in marches in downtown Santiago.
Sarah Wilkie
She certainly is a popular choice and I love the back stories you’ve imagined for her Annie 😀
Leya
Excellent explanations to excellent edits, Sarah! They are all stunning, but the lady in black is my favourite as a photo. If I were to choose, the barbed wire would get my vote for many reasons.
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you very much Ann-Christine 😊 That lady is proving popular and the wire also has quite a few votes. I’ll reveal all soon!
wetanddustyroads
For me, it’s also the ‘Woman in Black’. I like how you made the background ‘quiet’ so that the focus is entirely on the woman.
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you very much 😊 If it were down to my blog followers I think she would be selected for sure!
photobyjohnbo
Sarah, your edits all brought out what was best in these images. I have trouble “cropping square”, but you know how to focus on the subject in that format. When I saw the lady in your heading set, there was something that made me feel an immediate connection. The Lady from Chile would be my choice.
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you very much John 😊 I enjoy the challenge of cropping to a square, it makes you think differently about composition on some way. I’m glad you like that lady, she’s a favourite of mine, and seems to be a popular choice. But was she the chosen one? Watch this space …
Rose
The barbed wire… 💔 It’s so important to share the tragic truth…
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you Rose 🙂 I agree about sharing, naturally.
restlessjo
I like the Angkor Wat image, Sarah, and the elegant lady. Let’s hear it for the girls xx
Sarah Wilkie
Many thanks Jo 😊 The elegant lady seems to be getting a lot of votes but I have a soft spot for the Angkor Wat image too, I must confess!
Heyjude
I got a very odd error message when I tried to comment. I will try again.
I like the third edit of the lady but my preference is for the second edit of the barbed wire which is intriguing, I prefer that to the crop.
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you very much for persisting Jude, although it’s odd as I got your first comment just fine 🙂 And thanks for the feedback. I agree the second edit of the barbed wire works well but it wouldn’t have fitted the exhibition requirements for a B&W square.
Heyjude
I like the third edit of the lady, but the most intriguing image is the second one of the barbed wire, which I prefer to the final crop.
Anabel @ The Glasgow Gallivanter
That was an interesting read. I just love how the lady in the hat has turned out in the final edit – eliminating just about everything except her face somehow makes her even more enigmatic. That is by far my favourite photo so I hope it was considered to meet the brief best. I await the result with curiosity!
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you very much Anabel 😊 I too was pleased with the final edit on that shot of the lady in Santiago and was glad the exhibition had ‘forced’ me to try a square format for her. As to whether it was selected for the exhibition, you will have to wait to find out!
Diana
All great photos! Good luck at the show!
Sarah Wilkie
Many thanks Diana 🙂
Sue
Well, an interesting selection… To fit the brief I think the barbed wire and the lady in black would be my choices. and as a particularly simple and stark image I would pick the barbed wire
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you very much Sue 😊 All will be revealed in due course, but meanwhile I was interested to hear your views.
Steve Hyde
All your edits work well Sarah. Good luck with the exhibition. It must be exciting to be part of that 🙂
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you Steve 🙂 Yes, I’m excited to be involved and looking forward to our launch next week!
Teresa
As for me, I like the last one the best. But all of them are wonderful entries.
Sarah Wilkie
Thanks so much Teresa 😀 That last one seems to be popular!
Sofia Alves
I’m glad you’re not revealing just yet as I couldn’t avoid to read the other comments 🙂
All wonderful photos, Sarah and I love that you explained so well your work. Now, I’m going to pick the devata one as the chosen one, although my favourite, as a photo on its own, is the lady.
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you very much Sofia 😊 The lady in Santiago seems to be a general favourite!
Smitha V
Hi Sarah, Thank you for the detailed explanation with the pictures. It was a lesson in photography. The man on the beach came out sharper in black and white. I liked the explanation of the barbed wire. Your words made it a memorable piece, one that lingers in the mind. As for the woman in black, she’s makes for a fantastic portrait. She is a picture of class, elegance and fashion.
Sarah Wilkie
And thank you Smitha for the detailed feedback 😊 I agree that woman is very elegant and classy. And I’m glad you like the wording to accompany the barbed wire shot.
bushboy
Looks like it’s just Tina and I who like the barbed wire best.
margaret21
No, me too!
bushboy
That’s good
Sarah Wilkie
No, Margaret chose that one too! Thanks Brian 🙂
bushboy
As she liked to point out 😁
Anne Sandler
I’d go with the “Woman in Black.” You are great at street photography, and this portrait is exceptional. Waiting to hear!!!
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you very much Anne 😊 That seems to be a popular choice but you’ll have to wait to see if you’re right!
margaret21
As you know, I’m a fan of b/w and these work well, though particularly the last two. The woman in the last shot is a great portrait, but I suspect there were other good portraits too, so I might go for the barbed wire: different, and a simple yet thought-provoking image. I love the Angkor Wat image too, but oddly, your first sunbathing shot doesn’t hit the spot for me. Sorry! Looking forward to your announcing which one ‘won’.
Sarah Wilkie
Many thanks as always Margaret 😊 I love your detailed feedback and will share the curation team’s decision soon!
margaret21
Oh I see! It’s out of your hands?
Sarah Wilkie
Oh no, not at all – I’m ON the curation team 😃 I just want others to have the chance to guess!
margaret21
I know you are. But I guessed you didn’t have a vote on your own offering.
Sarah Wilkie
It was a collective decision and I actually ended up with the casting vote on mine as my two fellow curators were split between two images. We had to select all 18 together as were weren’t just looking at them as individual images but also how they would work together, what order to hang them in and which should sit next to which 🙂
margaret21
Exactly! I thought as much, which was why I went for Barbed Wire rather than Portarit. I thought there might be rather more images available of the latter!
Kirstin Troyer
Love these. Great choices.
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you Kirstin 🙂
Tina Schell
What a fun read and a great post Sarah. If I were judging I’d go with the barbed wire which is stunning in its simplicity which delivers such a strong message. My second choice and perhaps the one that would be chosen as a better fit for the show, would be the woman at the end. All are terrific
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you very much Tina 😊 I’m collecting the votes and will let you all know in a few days who guessed correctly about the selection!
Egídio
Sarah, what a difficult task to pick one. You know how I feel about your street photography. So, the lady with the hat would be the obvious choice, but it is not my pick. What if the lady is an actress trying to hide from the paparazzi? She failed miserably, didn’t she? Well, My pick is the guy on the beach. The story is humorous, and the photo is beautifully framed. That’s my pick. What was your pick?
Sarah Wilkie
Thanks so much Egidio 😀 I smiled at your comment about the lady failing to hide from the paparazzi! I’m glad you liked the shot of the guy on the beach too, but I’m not revealing the chosen image for a while so others can take a guess too.
Ritva Sillanmäki Photography
Sarah, I like the first and last the best, I would choose the lady. Did you choose the first one?
Sarah Wilkie
Thank you Ritva, it’s interesting to hear which images you like best 🙂 I won’t answer your question yet so other people can have a go at guessing!